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我心中的英雄是bonkura,他出生于日本.他是转笔世界杯的冠军.没有人比他更强.他发明了许多转笔的tricks.combos.但他因心脏病死于2007,那时候他年仅21岁.因为他忙于让更多的人了解转笔这项运动.但他是所有转笔者心目中的英雄." u1 W' M" c: q0 x& ]$ `- T
一点意见; There is a hero in my heart,he was born in Japan,he is the champion of the Pen Spinning World Cup and no one is better than him in the field of pen spinning.His name is bonkura,who invented many tricks and combos and made great contributions to the development of pen spinning.Unfortunately,because he was busy in making(be busy in doing.这是语法,另外一句句子里用来because就不能有but) more people get to know pen spinning,he died of heart disease in 2007 when he was only 21 years old.However,he is the hero in every psers' mind forever. |
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