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水1什么时候出国的?英语还不行...# Q" V5 U; j& m' T5 L& G' R3 y7 V
) {$ ?6 {3 @, y- I/ U% t% z原帖由 才才 于 2-5-2009 05:02 发表
$ M+ D1 v8 c7 j2 t- aDo you know the naming of penspinning?! {0 S( L5 Q0 T
This thing ought to be difficult,2 q1 D q- N, h R0 L
Still you'll attracted by its amazing,9 c) c& O j( s# ~/ _, h( R
And fascinated as a boy would.3 i" |' A2 E% z/ z
' U' S! w# l7 ?# R, N" P2 q7 `Why let your pal drowses aside?; s* P3 ~: T" z2 W
Modify, awake and ...
9 l1 v) H8 ^2 ~' A: ?+ E是 shot 不是 shout+ s3 l' G1 M8 d: _, e8 a$ E
而且好像押运的比较勉强...
" L" \; n/ ]* u! g3 Y; P你改了以后把音节押运改没了+ s3 N' k: V; \8 G
我记得好像是十一个音节, 比如# e- E' L9 s x
Do\ you \know\ the \nam\ing\ of \pen\s\pin\ning\* Z5 i* T8 }1 }+ t$ m. J( ^4 ~
还有好一些语法错误
9 m5 G& N$ B, m) A2 h7 d不过newton law 那个很nb的想法
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lz原来的不错,继续努力!
3 z4 Z, X: l4 L$ o' L' M引用悟空的5 i- n4 M7 J5 ^/ C3 ^1 ]
and we pserhome need you to support7 ]# r& p4 w+ s: Q: O! K$ j# H
变成
; }0 K( M# Y5 \4 Fand we penspinning need you to support
# k" }+ A2 k1 |* n4 O6 [9 R广告嫌疑不会太大...
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