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水1什么时候出国的?英语还不行...+ n1 b8 Q0 o- P) V; u; v1 _
3 b4 j" P/ D" U+ L2 g- N% }原帖由 才才 于 2-5-2009 05:02 发表
( ^4 j: y8 [9 o1 }2 S0 uDo you know the naming of penspinning?
* u$ U( n; f# ]$ n/ YThis thing ought to be difficult,/ X! d, [8 Z3 E: v8 V. K' S9 G
Still you'll attracted by its amazing,$ R3 p: d1 O5 H1 W) X
And fascinated as a boy would.1 W7 t+ _) `6 W) `) b
. h$ e/ A6 X. |% l4 |0 BWhy let your pal drowses aside?1 W+ ]! D9 _3 W" w! F
Modify, awake and ... $ b/ [2 P- g* r' q; E4 I
是 shot 不是 shout
* t! y7 s2 R9 m# H( Z而且好像押运的比较勉强..., t* D: s4 o% E$ D
你改了以后把音节押运改没了' X( S. n+ k* B f6 V( P5 N/ K# n! ~
我记得好像是十一个音节, 比如3 D- ?5 A$ H( T \- n/ D
Do\ you \know\ the \nam\ing\ of \pen\s\pin\ning\8 Y2 ]4 T3 S8 f# _; R; S
还有好一些语法错误
5 q* _3 c1 K5 H, a不过newton law 那个很nb的想法
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lz原来的不错,继续努力!
9 j0 `, V8 u& ?9 m5 T4 o0 }" R引用悟空的3 m- V5 q2 g$ B/ z9 m; W/ ^/ n
and we pserhome need you to support
! i% k$ k! h q8 w8 x变成
: [6 h% l7 \) Rand we penspinning need you to support
" t+ o5 A% ~) H, U广告嫌疑不会太大.... P, u" u, f5 Q% |$ |' M
; l$ r& z; t/ j1 p# ?- z" m[ 本帖最后由 wcgg110 于 2009-5-4 20:05 编辑 ] |
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