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发表于 2009-5-4 17:49:26
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水1什么时候出国的?英语还不行...1 p# t7 _$ |, [( D, Z
! U: X4 J, B+ u. a* B原帖由 才才 于 2-5-2009 05:02 发表 3 P* w! B! M, o9 P& \# J% x( m
Do you know the naming of penspinning?) m2 a) p$ I8 r, S) c5 n
This thing ought to be difficult, Z1 @" ?6 o6 Y! P+ [" }+ b5 l" `
Still you'll attracted by its amazing,1 N$ q% X7 g& m3 n1 a }5 F o% T
And fascinated as a boy would.7 _& i" _1 ]" C% F# {5 U! O, d- u
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Why let your pal drowses aside?4 a' n8 u6 t/ P' K8 }1 P
Modify, awake and ...
5 E0 p' u6 H: f& |" A是 shot 不是 shout& b% i2 }2 O3 i( X( h+ W
而且好像押运的比较勉强...1 r& @- ^+ t2 L' a; e; ]4 r' k' M
你改了以后把音节押运改没了0 \" b- t! U) v' P {
我记得好像是十一个音节, 比如5 V% p$ X- r; W8 Z/ f8 k
Do\ you \know\ the \nam\ing\ of \pen\s\pin\ning\* w1 O; I% k' P0 s2 n3 U; P! A
还有好一些语法错误# ]# F& p7 u' E" q" Z- q
不过newton law 那个很nb的想法( u2 b% m$ ?7 o* K, b+ d
u7 q1 ^" Q' x" C8 qlz原来的不错,继续努力!
* |2 C; |+ {# }* i, [9 k% z. n引用悟空的9 q: k- D$ D) o( D, p! a7 ~/ d" }
and we pserhome need you to support" l- b& R; P3 d
变成
4 `" u; j! v6 |- A" F9 eand we penspinning need you to support
$ \' l1 u- L, r" b6 G1 a广告嫌疑不会太大...9 U2 |, r; R. n& l3 j- F$ O/ S" f
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